#FOWC: Guide

You found me, the real me, hidden behind the face I showed to the world

You listened. You held me when I was afraid. You helped me explore

Those fears which caused me to live behind the high barricade

You showed me my beauty which I could never before see

You taught me to laugh at the flaws I’d thought so dire

You showed me my strength and my tender heart

You taught me to work and take pride in it all

With you I laughed, I cried, I truly felt

Love and loved. For you, only you

Were my guide but I lost you

On the path we took

Together. To


Written,ย  once again,ย  as response to a one word prompt fromย Fandangoย who has definitely sparked something in my imagination.





  27 comments for “#FOWC: Guide

  1. November 10, 2018 at 8:58 am

    Wonderfully depicted, the words used are able to exude the innermost heartfelt feelings. Hope to see more from you. Have hope, write on! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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  2. blindzanygirl
    November 10, 2018 at 9:22 am

    Absolutely BRILLIANT Lusa. So toyching. So pougnant. So heatrending. But yet beautiful. Lots of love to you xoxo

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    • November 10, 2018 at 9:30 am

      Thanks so much Lorraine and lots of love to you too – hope you have a great day :O) xx


  3. Dodge
    November 10, 2018 at 10:14 am

    Just beautiful xx

    Liked by 1 person

  4. November 10, 2018 at 11:06 am

    This is absolutely beautiful. So tender too. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  5. November 10, 2018 at 3:36 pm

    So happy that my prompts have been able to spark your imagination. Best feedback ever! Thanks.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. November 10, 2018 at 5:29 pm

    This is beautiful, but I felt so sad that the person was lost on the journey. Lovely words – you have such a talent with writing emotively ๐Ÿ™‚

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    • November 10, 2018 at 6:42 pm

      Thatโ€™s incredibly kind, thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™


  7. November 10, 2018 at 6:55 pm

    Reblogged this on Beutiflee and commented:
    The power of love can bring you confidence to be yourself. The real you is in there. Enjoy this post and checkout the other poems. She is great!

    Liked by 1 person

  8. November 10, 2018 at 9:36 pm

    wow! true love described so beautifully.

    Liked by 1 person

    • November 11, 2018 at 5:48 am

      Thank you my friend ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™ howโ€™s life with you? Xx

      Liked by 1 person

      • November 11, 2018 at 10:15 pm

        it is truly my pleasure. even if i don’t comment, please know i love all you do.
        ………..me, nothin’ but a party! ๐Ÿ™‚ and you my dear?

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      • November 12, 2018 at 5:40 am

        You are such a very kind person Wendi, I do hope that things are ok for you at the moment. All good my end thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š xx

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      • November 12, 2018 at 9:35 pm

        YAY! love to read that all is good on your end! thank you for your kindness, it is very much appreciated.

        Liked by 1 person

  9. November 11, 2018 at 1:09 am

    This is beautifully written

    Liked by 1 person

  10. November 16, 2018 at 3:53 am

    Itโ€™s a beautiful poem. Love the warm feelings of love.

    Liked by 1 person

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