The First…..

The first always the brave, the strong

The followers, lambs, reflections

The first to danger, excitement, adventure

By choice. The followers to danger by fear

The first loved, admired, lauded, applauded

The followers forgotten, pitied, ignored

Perception of the first, flawed, exagerated

We are all the first, the only, unique beings




  13 comments for “The First…..

  1. September 17, 2018 at 7:42 am

    Nice one with a beautiful ending…! ๐Ÿ‘Œ

    Liked by 1 person

  2. blindzanygirl
    September 17, 2018 at 7:56 am

    This is an amazing poem. So true

    Liked by 2 people

  3. September 17, 2018 at 2:11 pm

    so good my dear!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. September 17, 2018 at 4:56 pm

    This is beautifully penned!โค

    Liked by 1 person

  5. September 18, 2018 at 8:48 am


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  6. September 22, 2018 at 12:28 pm

    a strong poem which mirrors reality: the first are the pioneers, in any field, those who take the risks and rightly claim the rewards

    Liked by 1 person

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